Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Bilingualism

 Did you guys know a word called 'bilingualism?' Bilingualism is a people who can speak 2 
languages. I am bilingualism because English is not my first language. There 6 different 
levels for bilingualism and I think I am in level 3 because I am the person who likes to
speak my first language that English. Also, I am better at my first language. My goal is to 
become a 6th level person for bilingualism who passes in both languages for a negative 
speakers. To achieve my goal, I must try harder on my English in school to learn 
sensitively, but I must practice my first language because if I want to become lever 6 person, I have to be good at my first language too. 
Source-My teacher told us the information and showed us the picture.

2 comments:

  1. I really like the hook you started

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  2. I think 'Did you guys know a word called 'bilingualism?' is kind of weird. Maybe you could delete the 'guys' and turn 'did' into 'do'. Also, 'I am bilingualism' should be turned into 'I am bilingual'. Lastly, I like that you use 'must' to make your point stronger, but too many of them could make your story very repetitive.

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