Being critical with headlines

 In our class we are learning how to be critical with headlines that have given and I am going to make a judgement about the topic that says 'Showing tips for storm diet, let's start immediately' You guys would have saw a lot of headlines that is like this one, but actually I have an critical ideas for this headline.
Often, a lot of girls started to do diets and I am thinking that doing diet at adolescence is absolutely bad idea to do. If the girls are doing diet, most of girls just started to not eat the food, but if they do that, it would cause a big problem on their health. It would be very negative thing if they are just stopped growing up, but now, a lot of adolescents are doing it because they want to be beautiful. I think doing diet is negative thing to do in adolescence. Well, doing diet is negative, but actually internet does not always have correct and right informations. They can have wrong information and that cause your health to have problems. I would say that if you are adolescents and want to do some diets, meet the people who is expert at it have a conversation because they would tell you the better information that in the internet. It is very negative thing do to diet too much in adolescence.